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Snowfall on Unfamiliar Ground by ~Itchitaka:iconItchitaka:





"Snowfall on Unfamiliar Ground"

Alas, alas.
Oh woe is me.
For what joy is there for snow that has fallen...
On unfamiliar ground?
Snow that is trampled,
By unfamiliar boots?
Snow that is balled up,
By the unfamiliar little gloves...
Of unfamiliar little children?

I had settled in,
The cold air my roots,
And gray clouds my sustainers.
The fading imprint of snow angels as familiar,
As the young ones who left them.
Oh how nice that little town was.
Where did it go?
Was it swept from the cold surface?
As dust is swept from a tabletop
Long forgotten and barely used?

Oh how cruel this world is.
Where the young become old,
And the old wither away.
Leaves in the wind.

Oh what would I give?
To just stay in one place forever?
And escape the Sun's shining return,
Before it whisks me away once more.

Copyright © 2005 Jarred Lee
©2006-2009 ~Itchitaka
:iconitchitaka:

Author's Comments

The 7th addition to my poetry release series. Written while wishing for snow. It never snows here...


Credits: Suzhou



The poetry series thus far:

~~Love's Light in an Overwhelming Darkness [link]

~~Seek [link]

~~Restless [link]

~~A Man-Made Angel [link]

~~I Miss the Way it Never Was [link]

~~Silent Beauty [link]

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:iconlonersoul96:
LS: Really nice! So deep. Great work! :clap:

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:iconsun-kisses:
woooow..very good!! :) i really liked it! :clap:

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live, laugh, love!
:iconitchitaka:
Thankses! :)

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"By the time I realized it, I had already swung the bat. My palms still sting." -Naota (FLCL)

It's all just fun & games until the flying monkeys attack!

Clubs: *art-photography-club
:iconitchitaka:
Haha, thank you. :bow:

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"By the time I realized it, I had already swung the bat. My palms still sting." -Naota (FLCL)

It's all just fun & games until the flying monkeys attack!

Clubs: *art-photography-club
:iconsun-kisses:
no prob! :D

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live, laugh, love!
:iconlonersoul96:
LS: You are welcome! ^__^

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I made a promise I must fullfil at anycost, And I will!
Chrno Lovers Club ~Chrno-Lovers-Club
Miho Club ~fliying-miho
Village Hidden ~Hidden-in-the-Art
Kat club ~KatKittywolf-FANCLUB

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