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Moving On

It is finally time,
For me to move on.
Reach out towards old hopes,
And forgotten dreams,
And take them back.
I pray that they
Are still waiting for me.

The memories fly past,
Impossible to take hold of,
Though something deep inside me
Would give anything to try.
I close my eyes
And exhale those feelings.
They no longer have a place here.

Those days of staring up at the sky,
And wishing for a clearer tomorrow,
Are over for us.
You are no longer that person
I used to know,
And I no longer wish to be
That person you knew.

I have to move forward,
Though sometimes I can't help
But look back.
Reminisce about those smiles we had
And those laughs we shared.
I will never forget those days,
But nothing is holding me back anymore.

Take care.

Copyright © 2007 Jarred Lee
©2007-2010 ~Itchitaka
:iconitchitaka:

Author's Comments

This is the end of my second poetry series, and I think that this is a fitting way to end it. Some feelings and images will stay with you forever even if other things change. Even if you change. The hardest part is not letting them weigh you down.

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:iconpuwen:
Last two words are so fantastic; you weave this web of inspiring words, almost a self-message.

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:iconswimstarguy:
An excellent close to the series. It seems to close up and say good by very well.
Well done.


~Zar4
:iconblue-roses-to-dust:
:heart: this poem...

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.. and without you is how i disappear
and live my life alone forever now... (MyChemicalRomance)

.. believe, believe in me, believe ... (SmashingPumpkins)

.. and into skies of enlightened-poets [link]
:iconsun-kisses:
awwww that made me feel so much better!!! i really do LOVE this poem!!! *sigh* :heart:
it's really good!! :clap:

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live, laugh, love!
:icondeweygirl03:
quite true

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It's like once you've been hurt, you have this fear of getting attached again; that everyone you start to like is going to break your heart, but I want to be proven WRONG.
:iconitchitaka:
Thank you. ^^ I really wanted to end it on a good note, no harsh feelings either way...

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"By the time I realized it, I had already swung the bat. My palms still sting." -Naota (FLCL)

"What's this?! I sense a main character inside Bakura's millenium ring!" -Pegasus

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:iconitchitaka:
Thank you. I just hope that I can head in a proper direction from here.

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"By the time I realized it, I had already swung the bat. My palms still sting." -Naota (FLCL)

"What's this?! I sense a main character inside Bakura's millenium ring!" -Pegasus

*art-photography-club *Emotional-Writings *RawEm0tion
:iconitchitaka:
Thank you. ^^

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"By the time I realized it, I had already swung the bat. My palms still sting." -Naota (FLCL)

"What's this?! I sense a main character inside Bakura's millenium ring!" -Pegasus

*art-photography-club *Emotional-Writings *RawEm0tion
:iconitchitaka:
I'm glad that I could make you feel better. Thank you very much. :thanks:

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"By the time I realized it, I had already swung the bat. My palms still sting." -Naota (FLCL)

"What's this?! I sense a main character inside Bakura's millenium ring!" -Pegasus

*art-photography-club *Emotional-Writings *RawEm0tion
:iconitchitaka:
I am glad that you agree. ^^

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"By the time I realized it, I had already swung the bat. My palms still sting." -Naota (FLCL)

"What's this?! I sense a main character inside Bakura's millenium ring!" -Pegasus

*art-photography-club *Emotional-Writings *RawEm0tion

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