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I Miss the Way it Never Was by ~Itchitaka:iconItchitaka:





"I Miss the Way it Never Was"

I miss the way
it never was
I miss the laughs
we never shared
I miss the attention
you never gave
Maybe I've been dreaming for too long?

I wish we could have done those things
that we never did
I wish we could have seen those places
that we never saw
I wish we could have said those things
that we never said
Maybe I've wasted too much time?

Where did I lose my nerve?
When did I lose my faith?
I'm too afraid to move forward
and too determined to step back
Not much time is left
I can't keep doing this
Why am I stuck in the middle?

Leaving you behind is out of the question
Another day without you is unbearable
Life is too short to live this cautiously
I need to move ahead
I still have some time to work things out
I still have some time to live my dream
But how long will you wait for me?

Copyright © 2005 Jarred Lee
©2006-2009 ~Itchitaka
:iconitchitaka:

Author's Comments

The 5th in my poetry release series! Enjoy. =D


The series thus far:

~~Love's Light in an Overwhelming Darkness [link]

~~Seek [link]

~~Restless [link]

~~A Man-Made Angel [link]

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:iconspazlizard:
This is very sad.....


but it's an excellent poem!

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"There is no terror in the bullet, just the anticipation of it." -Alfred Hitchcock
:iconitchitaka:
Why thank you. :neom:

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"By the time I realized it, I had already swung the bat. My palms still sting."
:icongoodbyebluemonday:
strong emotions - i can REALLY relate to this.
the repetition of questions is emotionally effective, nice job.
:heart:

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La vita è un brivido che vola via...

Show me your world, and I'll show you mine.
:iconitchitaka:
Haha, thanks. :)

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"By the time I realized it, I had already swung the bat. My palms still sting." -Naota (FLCL)

It's all just fun & games until the flying monkeys attack!

Clubs: *art-photography-club ~Emotional-Writings
:iconichinisa:
waaa, great felling ^^

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~~Levantate y camina, tienes las piernas para ello~~
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:iconcryingpain:
Pretty good the repetition of words you used it well ^_^

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:frail:Every artist was first an amateur - 'Ralph Waldo Emerson':frail:
:iconitchitaka:
Thank you. I'm glad that you think so. =]

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"By the time I realized it, I had already swung the bat. My palms still sting." -Naota (FLCL)

It's all just fun & games until the flying monkeys attack!

Clubs: *art-photography-club ~Emotional-Writings ~NinDS ~n-wii*RawEm0tion
:iconamentessuntamentes:
This "hit way too close to home." It was very personal and made me think of my ex whom I still long for. Geez, I haven't felt a jump in my heart in that long.

I love this piece. Nice work.

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"Over 676,000 people have been killed by guns in the U.S.A. since John Lennon was shot and killed on December 8, 1980."

Raw Emotion: [link]
:iconlildragonfly:
I absolutely love it. I too like the repitition of questions and have felt like this before. Amazing :)

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~!*In the depths of her soul, the blackdove cries.*!~

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